Want some valuable writing advice?

Moderate passive voice as much as possible. Should be used sparingly.

Using a Stable Point of View helps cut out any reader confusion.

Don't start your MS in first person and then switch to third.

Avoid pronoun confusion. Use your characters names; they have them for a reason.

Use a proofreader. Another pair of eyes is always a great way to find things you may have overlooked.

The first chapter is your opportunity to grab the reader's attention. Often, people decide to purchase a book or put it back after only a paragraph or two. Increase your odds of success by starting with a strong opening that hooks the reader and makes them want to find out more. I strongly suggest getting a couple of beta readers after you revise your MS.

Action: Get the action going immediately. There's no room for a first chapter where nothing happens. If it's boring, readers won't keep reading. Readers respond to scenes that start in media res. There are a few important things that your first chapter must do:

1. Introduce a Story-Worthy Problem
2. Hook the Reader into Reading Chapter 2
3. Establish the Rules of the Story
4. Introduce Key Themes

 You want to make sure that the first chapter gives the reader an idea of what is to come. Starting off with minor characters can be confusing, so if you choose to do so, have a good reason. It can be a help to introduce your antagonist in the first chapter as well. Your MC should have their own set of motivations and unique characteristics. Begin the story at a moment of change and not long scenes of dialogue. Hopefully, these few pointers can at least minimize some of the mistakes that beginning writers often make. 

Okay, advice over. Now send us your MS and get back to writing. We need a lot more great books to read. (smile)

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