Writing Tip 4 from Elle

1. - Does the description of the setting transport you into the fictional world between the pages or are you still sitting in your chair bored to tears?

2. - Do the descriptions amble on for pages or are they interspersed throughout the story, via character's observations or through the effect each setting should have on characters?

3. - Do the characters, their actions and the time period agree or conflict?

4. - Does the order of events remain consistent throughout the story?

5. - Was the main character's hair dyed blue the night before only to have her wake up in the morning with her brown hair miraculously restored?

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